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Re: Faeid (Part I; Edited)
EDITED! Thanks to all who helped in this. Faeid Draft III, Mon 13 Mar 2006 Part One: Dawning “And what of your son, sire?” Lord Perdhel of Gongolas shifted his ...
Mar 13, 2006 -
Re: Faeid (Part I; Edited)
Hey what a coinkidink, I am editing Faeid right now... again. Ilen is an kingdom, Aea is the land/planet. I should probably make that clear, before chapter two. Kay, thank ...
Mar 13, 2006 -
Re: Favorites in Classic Literature...
Some more... Romaunt of the Rose, Chaucer Scarlet Pimpernel, Orczy Canterbury Tales, Chaucer The Art of War, Sun Tzu (...and in goverment classes... it was required reading along with The ...
Mar 13, 2006 -
Re: A Port In The Caribbean
...a pirates life for me... oh sorry wrong plot... At this time in the evening, the town was mostly empty: a few others traversed the wintered ground, and the continuous ...
Mar 13, 2006 -
Re: Member of the Week 3/12-3/19
YAY Ari, una fiesta!
Mar 13, 2006 -
Re: vocal artillery (en español)
thank you dear! I should have put this up - Cumbia, is a form of dance from Columbia. So basically 'cumbia' means 'dance'... Cumbia is originally a Colombian folk dance ...
Mar 12, 2006 -
Re: vocal artillery (en español)
This is part of a poem I am writing for a friend (her birthday present actually), and I was wondering, for all who speak spanish out there (or not) if ...
Mar 12, 2006 -
Re: A Question of Loyalty
It reads so well, and I love the allusions of the last stanza. I don't have much to say except it made me think, and think in a good way. ...
Mar 12, 2006 -
Re: m.a.l.a.i.s.e
I think this is the right rating... all comments, crits, suggestions welcome. CL m.a.l.a.i.s.e -I am going to die- she whimpers fingers gouging at my scalp tangledbrambles in my hair ...
Mar 12, 2006 -
Re: Lounge Singer
Awww thank you all... :oops: I really enjoyed writing this one. And Xan, alliteration is the word I think you are thinking of. Ciao, CL.
Mar 12, 2006 -
Re: Interrogative (Challenge - 3/6)
hehheh... reminds me of the crazy monologue. I like the POV how it is :D, a bit Schizo for the best. My favorite line would be - That hurts like ...
Mar 12, 2006 -
Re: Spiced Salve (Curative Therapies)
Firstly - Do the Punc! As Bob would say. Secondly - my crit - so here we go - Fire tongues leave black scraps In it’s weary wake - I ...
Mar 12, 2006 -
Re: A Port In The Caribbean
Yes Kay, Truro is a real place. More exposure, agreed. I just finished reading it once-over, but I've got stuff on the stove, so I'll post my crit later. First ...
Mar 11, 2006 -
Re: American War of Independence (or Revolution ... )
Although the term "guerilla" was not coined until around 25-30 years later in the Peninsular War when the Spanish and Portuguese used it against the French. - Well yes... hmmm... ...
Mar 11, 2006 -
Re: Riddle
Oooo, just lovely. Made me laugh. :D
Mar 10, 2006
